Okay, last time I asked for some feedback I got it. Now lots
of people might be disappointed with what was said, but I sure wasn’t. I knew
the options I had weren't right, but wasn’t sure what to do about it. I guess I am
too close to the project. Anyway, after some constructive feedback, the cover
for Hunter has been reworked and we’re happy with it now. The question is; what
do you folks think of it?
We pushed back the launch a bit to get a better cover. Now
the aim is for a launch on Monday. I’ll keep you posted. Meanwhile, here’s
another excerpt for you.
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August sat and gave him a quizzical look. “Things back on
your home world have gotten out of control, August. Against my better judgment,
we are sending you in to straighten it out. Specifically, you are going back to
the town where you grew up. The Vorlox have an entry point near there and they
have several agents on that world. Your task will be to stop them while
thwarting their efforts to kill the offspring. Your new partner will meet you
there.”
“Offspring? New partner?”
“O-Goost, generations ago, the Vorlox tried to blend their
own species with yours. For some reason they aborted the plan and tried to kill
off all the descendants of the experiment. Three remain: an old woman, her
daughter, and her granddaughter. The granddaughter is to be your new partner.
Your task is to keep her safe while eliminating the Vorlox on your home
world.”
“What training has she had?”
“None, O-Goost, but we believe she may have some of their
psychic abilities, for she can read energy and see auras clearly. She has lived
her life eluding both the Vorlox and the authorities of her world. Even as you
are a great hunter, Tracee is the uncatchable prey. Together you will be the
perfect team.”
“How many enemy agents?”
“Probably nine or perhaps more.”
August barely heard the rest of the briefing. She was being
sent in, alone, to a world that was nearly lost. Her task was to find an
untrained girl and together they were supposed to save this doomed world. Her
world. Their world.
She sighed deeply as she turned in her uniform and donned
the jeans and boots that were to be her disguise. A few moments later a heavily
armed August Summers was back in her hometown on Earth; the last place she
wanted to be.
ROW80 Goals.
Actually getting Hunter completed and published during this
round was a major goal, the major goal. I will save the rest for after Monday’s
launch.
Congrats! I love that cover...and your excerpt. Enjoy.
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Hey there, thanks. Checking out yours now.
ReplyDeleteWell darn, I missed the cover discussion last time. But the excerpt sounds really good! OK, now putting on my graphic designer hat... I like this cover better than the ones posted before. My main concern is that the type is hard to read. I'd suggest making it larger (at least the title), and in a color that will stand out more against the green - say, white or yellow.
ReplyDeleteHope that helps - and congrats on the new release!
Hey Jennette. The white font rocks. Thanks loads.
DeleteHi Jennette, thanks for the feedback. Sadly, with the programs we have available, coupled with the new specs for Book covers, we can't get the font any larger. We tried other fonts, but didn't like the look. Personally I'd love to have a more graceful font in a larger size. Now, the color I can change, so I'll go have a look at that right now.
ReplyDeleteCongrats for finishing Hunter and publishing it this round. I've long admired the amount of work that you do, most impressive. Here's hoping that Hunter's launch soars.
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