Hi folks, here we are again and
this time I have no magical victories to share with you. I have had the week
from chaos and next week isn’t looking much better. I have had heavy rains,
ferry boat issues, and too many family obligations. Next week is shaping up to
be much of the same. In view of that, and understanding that you don’t want to
hear me whine and snivel, I am re-posting some advice for beginning authors. It
seems like simple stuff, but you’d be surprised how many people miss the mark.
As many of you know, I have been
seeking out new authors and their first book to read. I have noticed a few
disturbing trends.
Today I want to share with you
something that all writers need to be aware of, yet it is far too common in first
time authors. I’m not going to preach about vocabulary, sentence structure,
dangling what-cha-ma-call-‘ems, adverbs or any of that stuff. I’m going to
shoot at something far more basic, yet all too often neglected or just
overlooked, but either of these two points can cripple your career as an
author.
Point one:
If you want to write a series, by
all means write a series. Plenty of writers do it, and some have made a career
out of it. There is a right way and a wrong way to do this.
Recently I was reading a first
novel and really enjoying it. I liked the characters and the author’s voice.
The plot was good and I was having fun until… I turned the page to see, “The
End the story continues in book 2,3,4,5 available here.” What the Hell? We were
in the middle of the conflict, nothing at all had been resolved, and that’s it?
This is how to make a reader feel cheated. No, I won’t buy the rest of the
series.
I have found this several times
in the past few months and it is such a shame. The proper way to write a series
is to have each book resolve it’s conflict and finish off with a proper sense
of closure. Yes, it is clear that these characters have more to do, but for the
moment, they have a chance to breathe.
David Eddings was a master of
this. Read any series of his to see how it is done properly. If you want to see
a new author do it right, check out Phoenix Child by Alica McKenna Johnson.
Alica nailed it first time.
Point two:
Now this one drives me crazy and
I have recently found it in a book by a well-received author. I call it
multiple personalities. The author starts off writing the story in the first
person. Cool, no problem, but then he starts leaping from body to body.
example: Chapter one starts off,
“I am a space faring female robot escaping the Galactic police. I am afraid. Is
there no one who will help me?”
Chapter two starts off with, “I
am Captain Nogor of the Galactic Police. I am hunting a runaway robot. I will
catch her or else I will perish.”
Chapter three starts, “I am
Junbi, a farmer on a backward planet. I am in love with and hiding a female
robot from the Galactic Police.”
See what I mean? For pity’s sake
people. I just started a new book, first chapter is written in the first
person. The second chapter is written in the first person. Chapter one is a
female character, chapter two is a male character. What the hell are you going
to do when they meet? Beat you way through one of these books and you may end
up needing therapy.
Here’s how it works, people. One
character gets to be written in the first person, the rest in the third person.
It ain’t that danged complex.
I didn’t include any examples of
the books where they got it wrong, but I urge you to take a hard look at your
work and make sure this isn’t you. The last thing an author wants is to annoy her
readers.
So, has anyone else out there
ever encountered this? Yes? No? Maybe so? Talk to me folks, tell me what you
really think. You know you want to. J
And so to ROW80
This week is a complete loss.
Barely managed two thousand words and read only a couple of blogs, I hope I can
manage a bit better this coming week.
I've been fortunate enough not to see the multiple personalities mistake, but I just saw a leave'em hanging one. I was checking out a book recommended by one site, when I read that the book ended abruptly, with links to the following volumes. No, thanks!
ReplyDeleteGreat advice, Prudence!
Elizabeth Anne Mitchell
Hi Elizabeth,I agree that it's a no thanks issue. It's not that hard to solve the current issues and still leave the reader wanting more from the characters. If your characters are good, the reader will always want more. I sure do.
ReplyDeleteSome weeks are like that. It's good to know we belong to a group of writers who recognize "life happens." Hope this week is going better.
ReplyDeleteThanks Steph, this week is going much better. I hope your week is rocking too.
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